Well i made this in black and white then i decided to color it and edit some dark areas to them. Then i made some areas glow by deleting the darker areas and editing the color to reflect the original tones of the page.
this is awesome, dont entirely know why this image is sooooooooooooooo common(ive drawn similar stuff several times) but i always enjoy it, the advice id give you is to try working with dynamic lighting more, like having everything fade into a void as it moved away from the center, and giving a glow to the computer monitors would look wonderful(look into the hildebrandt brothers if you need a reference for what i mean)
that or i would try making the colors more vivid and psychedelic i think the term they use is "superflat"
either or, still the dimensions and perspective are great
thanks! Her Name is Oasis Mirage Moon She is actually a Demi-God/Cyborg, so she is the Processor of the computer system. Yah see this computer can actually manipulate reality from a far and only the processing power of a Demi-god mind can accomplish such a task